I did! I added the "that guy has no appeal" line to the last scene in the story (the denouement). And yes, I had Winn say it, because it fits his character more than that of anyone else in the cast.
How are things in Palm Beach Co.?
Extremely hot and humid - the worst summer ever, weatherwise! That's why I had my latest story take place during a heat wave - one severe enough to even affect Kara. But thankfully, we're not having a problem with wildfires here, like they are in California. (I put the wildfires into the plot of the new story, too.) By the way, school starts again here for the teachers on Thursday of next week, but the students don't return until Aug. 10. Needless to say, I'm now the senior member of the science dept. at Forest Hill.